考研英語一大作文範文及點評
Company
As depicted in the first half of the cartoon, a loving mother held the hand of a little girl thirty years ago. While in the second half, the little girl, who has become an adult, holds her aged mother tightly three decades later. The combination of the two does indicate the connotation of the word "company".
It cannot be denied that parents contribute their countless vigor and energy in the cultivation of their children. Every progress of children is immersed with their parents’ dedication and efforts. As time passes, children become robust grown-ups, while parents get weak and feeble. And this is the very moment for them to change their positions, namely, the former should put their heart and soul to care for the latter. This care not only belongs to the fulfillment of responsibilities, but also functions as the most precious rewards for the latter.
As far as I am concerned, once parents and children can identify their responsibilities in different phases of life and keep in good company with each other, a more harmonious society will be just around the corner.
點評：本篇考研英語一大作文題材涉及親情的話題，養老問題也是當今的社會熱點話題之一，該類相關話題在前幾年的真題中也曾經出現過。表述觀點方面則要格外注意，需使用高級詞彙以及句型並注意詞彙的同義轉換，才能拿到高分。第一部分，首先簡明扼要地概括圖片的兩個部分；作文的第二部分則是重點闡明圖片的深層內涵；第三部分可以進行總結或是展望。
