考研英語看圖作文範例點評：充電學習

看圖作文在英語作文中是大家普遍缺乏練習的一種類型，一個提高的方式就是看範例和點評，針對其中的錯誤進行自我修正。

充電學習：

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寫作原文

There is no doubt that the two cartoons vividly demonstrate a positive and ubiquitous scenario in modern society: increasing number of people go to miscellanelous(拼寫錯誤，改爲miscellaneous) training programs. A majority of people, with smile on faces, swarm into English classes and attend the lectures about WTO. What is conveyed(建議改爲conveys) by the drawings is both inspiring and illuminating. What might account for this mushrooming phenomenon? Several points analyzed below may equip us with deeper comprehending of what we head for. First things first, the rapid development of economy has been accompanied with a corresponding of fierce competition. Therefore, many people prefer to attend some lectures about their careers, in the desire to(改爲and want to,文中in the desire to表示“在慾望中建立”) keep abreast of the latest development of technology. In addition, the constant international communication stimulates people to endeavor themselves to learn something which is beyond their majors, thus subjecting the increasing challenges to their own minds(改爲thus they may challenge themselves and broaden their knowledge). Last but not least, the desire for studying signifies the pursuit of individuality. From what has been mentioned above, we can safely conclude that if we are ever going to survive(加in) the harsh society, we must persist in learning new skills and knowledge. Only in this way can make us(改爲we make ourselves to be) perfect candidates for a promising future.

總體點評

整體來說，文章寫得不錯;但還存在個別簡單的語法錯誤。作者在寫作完之後若可以花費幾分鐘時間來回讀文章，便會減少不必要的錯誤。考研作文的整體思路你已經基本掌握，後面要做的就是多積累高分佳句，爲自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之後一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。

參考分數(滿分20分)：15

英語寫作水平的提升需要不斷地練習，在改正錯誤中不斷取得進步，不怕犯錯誤，怕明知道犯錯誤卻不面對。看了範文和點評，希望大家有思考，有提高。