關於求職信的細節問題

寫求職信的目的在於獲得職位，一封求職信無論如何文辭並茂，令人心動，公司HR主管不見到應聘者本人是不會給予工作機會的。接下來，小編給大家準備了關於求職信的細節問題,歡迎大家參考與借鑑。

一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認爲不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因爲這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點。

Replying to your advertisement...

Answering your advertisement...

Believing that there is an opportunity...

Thinking that there is a vacancy1 in your company...

Having read your ad...

再比較下面三組例句。每一組裏面(1)句較差，經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。

A:

(1) Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager.

(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will meet your exacting2 requirements.

B:

(1) I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's Journal that you are offering just the opportunity I am looking for.

(2) Your advertisement in this morning's Journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.

C:

(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.

(2) In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting3. Please consider me an applicant4 for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified5 for this work.

二、在提到希望得到的待遇時，可用類似的句子：

I'd prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, I consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.

It's hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed I would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.

I don't feel that I should set my own salary, as I am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship6.

三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：

As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would $4,500 a month be too much?

Do you think I would be asking too much if I said 5,000 dollars a month?

You know what my services are worth better than I do. All I want is a living wage.

四、關於求職信的結尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組裏面(1)句較差，經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。

A:

(1)軟弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you.

(2)改寫後(較佳)： If my qualifications meet your standards, I would be happy to speak with you in person.

B:

(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的： If you are interested, please let me know immediately, as I'm sure an interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.

(2)改寫後：I would like to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.

C:

(1) 哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時間)：I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.

(2) 改寫後： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone number is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day

　　擴展：面試時的禮儀

準備面試，固然要考慮怎樣回答面試官可能會問到的問題，同時面試時的禮儀也不能忽視。即使你問題回答的再好，準備的再充分，如果在禮儀上表現不佳，面試恐怕也要打個折扣。畢竟，越是細微之處，越能看出一個人的本性。

下面給大家提供一些面試禮儀的知識，多多練習，習慣就成自然了。

1. Know something about the organization you are applying to.

瞭解一些你申請工作單位的情況。

2. Dress properly. Don't shake hands with the interviewer until he/she extends1 his/her hand.

穿着要得體，人家伸手時才握手。

3. Don't sit down until invited to do so by the interviewer.

人家未請，先別坐下。

4. Make eye contact with the interviewer during the interview.

面試時，眼睛要看着對方。

5. Listen actively2 and stay calm.

注意聽，保持冷靜。

6. If invited to a meal, be especially careful about your table manners.

被邀吃飯時，要特別注意餐桌禮節。

7. Don't talk with your mouth full.

嘴裏有食物，不可開口說話。

8. Don't make much noise while you eat.

吃東西不要出聲音。

9. Don't blow your nose or use a toothpick at the table.

不要擤鼻涕或用牙籤剔牙。

10. Don't appear to be pushy3 or overly anxious to get a job.

不必過分表現急着要工作。

11. Be honest but not too modest.

要誠實，但不必太謙虛。

12. Don't put yourself down or cut yourself up.

不可妄自菲薄或自貶。

13. Try to avoid discussing politics or religion with your interviewer.

避免與面試人談政治或宗教