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乾貨!雅思寫作考試中常見的語病問題分析

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想要在雅思作文部分得到滿意的分數,那是非常不容易的。只有你的作文夠精彩,語法句式用詞方面沒有太大的錯誤纔有可能。當然很多人也會在這個時候犯一些語病上的錯誤,這樣就會使得句子奇怪。下面就來分析一下這個問題吧!

乾貨!雅思寫作考試中常見的語病問題分析

1. 雙謂語錯句

eg. For those under 26, there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型屬於雙謂語錯句高發句型,因爲句中的be動詞已經是謂語,而句子後面的動詞通常是定語從句中的成分,故不能作爲主句中的謂語。例句中同時出現了“were”和“study”,根據上面的分析,were應該是謂語,而study for career應該是定語從句,因此,例句應修正改成:

For those under 26, there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26, there were 80% students studying for career.

2. 句子不完整

eg. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語是the most popular kind of transport,謂語動詞(系動詞)是was, 而by road按照語法應該是方式狀語,此句缺乏表語。應改成:

The most popular kind of transport was road.

3. 主系表結構使用錯誤

eg. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主幹結構是:we are impossible“我們是不可能”,表意不對。這種表達在英語中對應的句型是:It is…for…to…, 所以應該改成:

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

4. 情態動詞後的動詞原形和動名詞的使用出錯

eg.Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

這種錯誤可能是筆誤,在雅思作文中偶爾出現不至於扣分,但是通篇都是這樣的錯誤,那麼肯定是有影響的。

“花更多時間在電腦上”這個動詞短語作爲主語應該要用動名詞形式:

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

5. 標點符號用錯

eg. As far as I am concerned, people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引導的句子做原因狀語從句,既然是從句,那麼前面就不應該使用句號使其獨立成句,而應該改成逗號,because首字母小寫。

6. 詞性使用錯誤

eg. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞,而這裏構成to do(不定式),只能用動詞。因此,可改爲:

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

7. 從句的誤用和濫用

eg. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語,固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引導的定語從句和that引導的表語從句連用,氣勢磅礴,這就是所謂的高分句型。

eg. In this essay, I will discuss what those, who are two kinds of people in this topic, are how to think and how to choose. 實再迂迴婉轉,不知所云。

這就是雅思寫作考試中常見的語病分析的相關內容,希望可以幫助到各位烤鴨的備考。對於好的方法有效的技巧我們要好好的練習應用,對於一些常見的問題我們也要了解清楚然後避免自己再犯,希望大家能夠認真注意。