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隨着出國留學成爲一件越來越熱門的事情,參加雅思考試的人數也逐漸增多,越來越多地人對雅思考試不再陌生,對於備考雅思寫作的考生來說,需要做的第一件事就是了解雅思寫作的評分標準,下面我們就帶大家來看雅思作文如何評分計算。

雅思寫作如何算分的

雅思寫作如何算分

第一個標準是切題(Task Achievement)。

此項評分標準檢測的是考生是否恰當回答了寫作要求的程度(degree to which the exam question has been answered properly).任務完成情況主要包括三個方面:內容(content)是否切題,立場(position)是否鮮明並得到有效闡釋,結構(structure)是否有邏輯性。

很多考生對這個標準的理解其實停留在不跑題的層面,所以他們考完後都認爲自己語法詞彙俱佳,卻不知道自己爲什麼分數不高。其實不然,考官要看到的作文不但緊扣主題,而且要論證充分。如果考生要證明的觀點只有1-2個分論點,而且每個分論點的Supporting Details也不充分,肯定是很難拿高分的。

第二個評分標準是銜接與連貫(Coherence&Cohesion)。

文章的連貫性主要體現在段落與段落之間,句子與句子之間。段落之間的“啓”、“承”、“轉”、“合”可通過表順序的過渡詞完成。句子的長度和難度是很多考生追求的目標,其實並不需要每個句子都寫得很長很複雜,相反,如果整篇文章都是長難句,考官也會覺得很厭煩。

很多考生簡單認爲要多寫邏輯連詞就能做到銜接與連貫。其實這也是個片面的理解。沒錯,邏輯連詞非常重要,但是,不是銜接與連貫的全部。很多考生過去追求邏輯連接而忽視了Contents本身,忽視了對最Powerful&Persuasive論證的選取。劍七的第171頁一篇Band7的意思作文,考官的評語裏就有:" There is some under-use of cohesive devices and some incorrect referencing, but links bet ween sentences and paragraphs can be clearly followed. " 上句發送我們一個信息,邏輯連接詞的使用不足是問題,但是內容本身也不能出問題,所以寫作要講究形式也要注意本質。劍六的162也一篇7.5分的考生範文,考官評價道:"There are too many errors in cohesion, however, and some linkers are not always fully approximately",這也印證了考生往往會一不留神地形似而忘內容本身的錯誤。

第三個評分標準是:詞彙資源(Lexical Resources)。

我們對雅思寫作詞彙有兩個誤解,一個上文已經提到,認爲越大越好,殊不知濃縮的纔是精華的。第二個誤解是寫作的選詞越大越好,比如寫貧窮,很多學生寫 impoverishe

d 或者impecunious,他們認爲出現頻率越少的詞彙分數越高。所以詞彙量不到自然沒有信心。其實不然,寫作的詞彙技巧在劍六劍七的考官評語中可以N次發現這個詞--Paraphrase. 有時候寫的是inadequacy of paragraph(劍七page166), 有時候寫paraphrase is not always logical(劍七169). 其實這裏面隱藏了一個潛規則。我們可以使用詞性轉換的方式,定語從句,後置定語改寫的方式來同義替換而不是單單從近義詞或者同義詞這個層面。比如我們可以寫 those who are in need 表示窮人,或者people living in poverty,或者 those who are financially incapable 都是很好的替換窮的表達。

幾條小建議:

1)注意學習同義詞

2)學習詞夥(collocation),而非一個獨立的單詞

3)使用正確的詞性

4)寫完一定要檢查(檢查拼寫錯誤,豐富語言)

5)正確使用一些不常見詞彙注意:考官並不會看你詞彙或觀點的創新性,而是有效、準確地闡述!

第四個標準是語法結構的範圍和準確性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)。

此項評分標準考察考生寫作語法的多樣性&準確性。語法的多樣性發面方面,請關注:時態,比較級,條件句,情態動詞,被動語態的使用。同時也請注意使用複雜句,注意整篇文章簡單句和複雜句用量的平衡。注意,標點符號使用錯誤也會失分!不過,並不要求考生做到100%無誤,但控制錯誤率很重要!

雅思作文如何拿分第一題,小作文。除了偶爾出現的流程圖外,整體上都是給出一個或多個互相關聯的圖表、圖解或表格,對其中涵蓋的信息或數據進行描述不少於150字。這道題,百分百可以用寫作模版來解決。面對題目信息,首先要抓住趨勢描述、數據對比、數據極值,然後利用模版來將這些信息表達出來。多找幾篇真題練熟就可以。

第二題,大作文。給出一個看法、問題或議題,考生就此進行論述,不少於250字。這道題,百分之三十可以用寫作模版來解決。結構、開頭、結尾都可以套用模版,論述部分需要表達自己的觀點。也就是說,模版是骨,語言是肉。關於模版可以參考我之前的一篇文章,重點掌握結構,學好連接詞、轉折詞、常用短語的用法,然後自己提前準備好模版。

這裏面也有一個潛規則,那就是很多考生認爲長難句,或者說語法越難越高分。所以他們常常根據高考英語語法的水平衡量自己寫作的語法水平。其實這是完全不同的兩個概念。原因很簡單,高考考的都是"糾結中的糾結",雅思寫的都是"複雜中的簡單"。我們仔細看看劍六劍七後面的7分和7.5分的考生範文,還有考官8分範文我們發現,考生習慣性寫長難句考官卻習慣寫簡單語法。

我們發現考官的範文中常見語法中最多的是:並列句。這是一個出乎很多考生意料的結果,呵呵。比如劍七page168,小作文的一段就兩句話共65個字。兩句話都是並列句。In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity sources(50units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power(each producing 20 units) and oil(which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had became the fuel for more than 75% of electri city produced and only hydro continued to be another significant sou rce supplying approximately 20%.

雅思寫作最爛能給幾分 雅思寫作有低於5分的嗎

很多考生的雅思寫作是比較弱的項目,所以考試前總會有雅思寫作最爛給幾分或雅思寫作有5分以下的嗎這種疑問,有這種問題還是說明你的備考不夠到位,最起碼你沒有進行基礎的複習,要知道雅思寫作最爛有幾分,我們首先要來一起看一下雅思閱讀的評分標準:

雅思寫作是由考官按任務完成情況(Task 1)/任務回答情況(Task 2)、連貫與銜接、詞彙變換、句式多樣性和語法準確性這四項標準來分別評等級分。

寫作任務完成情況/任務迴應情況:

雅思寫作Task1,考生都需要按照要求完成寫作任務,要求是根據作文的要求找出所有關鍵信息,進行解釋說明,必要時需要提供細節內容,如出現重要數據,要確保其準確性。

雅思寫作Task2,要求考生回答題目中的要求,表達自己的觀點,並用相關論據解釋自己的觀點。

連貫與銜接:

關於連貫性和銜接,主要考察的是考生的文章主旨能力和信息觀點的連接能力。連貫性具體指的是文章的流暢度、文章觀點的邏輯是否清晰,段落結構是否恰當。

銜接性指的是考生對於連接詞的使用是否能夠幫助考生整合觀點,將段落、句子和句子成分之間的關係闡明清楚。

詞彙變換:

首先多注意積累同義詞,減少重複用詞;注意描述和表達方式的多樣化,在轉述題目時,儘量使用同義詞或其他表達方式,避免重複題目中的原詞;注意詞彙搭配和詞組的使用,不太需要所謂的高級詞彙。

另外,關於詞彙準確性,考生要注意詞彙的使用語境、詞彙的拼寫。很多考生喜歡用一些生僻詞彙,卻做不到多樣和準確,考官對於詞彙的要求只是準確,多樣,所以儘管考生備考很努力,但分數依然不高的原因就是搞錯了寫作評分標準中對詞彙的要求。

句式多樣性和語法準確性:

雅思寫作對於句式多樣性的要求主要是在作文中,注意時態、比較級、動詞、複雜句等使用。而準確性則是建立在使用的場景正確。

所以說按雅思評分標準,最爛應該就是5分,運氣好點,會得5.5分。

5分的標準是,字數夠,不偏題。

6分的標準是,字數夠,不偏題,用對一個複雜句。

5.5分的標準是,字數夠,不偏離,嘗試用一個複雜句,但是有錯誤。

這個是硬性的標準,但是寫作這個東西不是客觀題,會帶有一定主觀性,所以考官個人的喜好,嚴厲程度,會造成成績上下0.5誤差。但不會差太多。

另外還有的問題就是考生在時間緊張和頭腦比較緊張的情況下可能會忘記提前準備的句子,這時候你寫出來的就都是陳詞濫調了,以下的這些句子考官看到就不會給你高分了:

1.

這個句子出現在文章裏相當於廢話,除了說明結構,其中沒有包含任何實際信息點。不要用這樣的句子,而是直接清晰地說出你的觀點,還有一個類似的就是“I shall put my arguments to support my views in the following paragraphs”這種也得避免。一般的考試可能很有用,但是雅思考試卻行不通。

2.

大多數同學都用過這招吧?但是這個句子也用的爛大街了,如果是科技文還行,不是科技文你不是給讀者造成困擾了麼,不用說這些客套話,直接在文章中說出你的話題就行。

3.

這也是用得太多了,雅思essay的話題大多數都是當前的話題,你不需要加上個時間限定,這個句型只適合過去跟現在對比的那一種,since the dawn of time...跟雅思問題不沾邊,還有人用Nowadays來開頭,再說一遍以上都不需要,你就直接說關鍵信息就行。

4

這個句子相當於誤用,雅思考試的大多數話題都沒有什麼爭議,controversial的意思是引發深入討論和強烈反響的那種,比方說“the death penalty”,但是“watching sport on TV or playing it”這種基本上沒太大爭議。記住雅思作文99%的話題都是沒有什麼爭議的,所以'highly debatable"的使用也一定要小心!

5.

這個也用的太多了,其實“the most important aspect...”或者“one of the key issues is ...”在作文裏的表達更自然一些。

6.

雅思task2的寫作不必非得要引用那種出版了的或者非常知名的研究,像'for instance, the majority of working people do not..."就行。

7.

閱卷老師已經看過n多次這個句子了,還不如就寫成'learn more","opening their mind to something"或者"developing deeper understanding of something”,別光是背別人的句子,你要自己自然地表達觀點。

8.

這也是一個不應該出現的“套句”,“one reason that X is improtant/crucial...”"it cannot be denied"是使用最多的一個病句,它的意思是100%的正確,但是essay裏面的大多數都不是板上釘釘的事實,有變化的區間,所以說這裏用不合適。

9.

很多同學也喜歡用這個習語開始自己的文章,但這是一個非正式的用法,在雅思考試裏是不太合適的...

10.

這也是結尾處應該避免的,你只需要在文章結尾處簡單地重新說一下你的主要觀點就行,不要用這種背下來的固定句式。

雅思寫作範文:政府應投資什麼

Task:Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer:

Where tax payers’ money goes is an issue of broad interest to the general public. Some people advocate that the government should give the health care the first priorities, while opponents hold the idea that other fields like education and public facilities are worth government funding. As far as I’m concerned, the possibility remains that the opinions can be reconciled and the government can coordinate budgeting to meet the needs.

Government interference in health-care and medical services is also highly recommended. Availability of affordable medical service is a mark of the social and economic development of a country. By providing the needy people with medical service, a country can inspire the loyally of citizens. People feel assured living and working in a country where they can be given medical service when unemployed, sick, injured or retired. By comparison, if they cannot afford the high cost of visiting the clinic, hospitalization, or buying drugs, they are less likely to enjoy their living. Social solidarity will eventually suffer.

However, both empirical knowledge and academic research suggest that making education available throughout a country and eliminating illiteracy can pave the way for economic development. By receiving education, children from impoverished families can shake off poverty, climb high in the social ladder and live better off. Education also allows citizens to secure employment and cam regular income, thereby maintaining or improving their standard of living. In the hierarchy of human needs, those needs for food, shelter and health are among the basic. After these targets are attained, people turn to higher aspirations, entertainment and recreation. Leisure facilities like stadiums are cinemas satisfy people's needs in these fields.

To draw a conclusion, the decision to finance health care or other fields depends on the financial situation of a country. When an economy comes to maturity, the launch of educational system and recreational entertainment projects are reasonable.

(312 words)

雅思寫作範文:出國遊

Task:International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds,why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?

Sample answer:

Such is human nature to explore those exotic countries and feel the sense of refreshment. Many people desire to expand their minds and enrich their experience of the world during the process of visiting their dream tourism destination. However, some problems inevitably ensue. Instead of feeling the pleasure of travel, what some sightseers feel are only culture prejudice, conflicts and misunderstandings.

First, historical differences and diverse customs, to some extent, contribute to the bias, misunderstandings and even hostility. A case in point is that eating dog meat is permissble and understandable in some minority areas in China. More precisely, Taiwan people might be quite amazed when hearing or seeing dog meat is edible, for it is illicit and forbidden to persecute dogs in Taiwan. It is conceivable that Taiwan tourists might be quite shocked and disappointed when visiting some Korean minority areas in Mainland in China. People there always take dog meat as delicious foods.

Further, some sightseers’ deeply rooted concept, and diverse life experience account for the appearance of culture prejudice. To illustrate, a kind of benediction like may you children become a dragon might be acceptable in Chinese culture. However, westerns might consider this kind of malediction as a curse for their children, for dragon equals to monster in western culture.

Several methods should be adopted to help tourists minimize the potential culture bias or emotional misunderstanding. Primarily, before paying a visit to one tourism destination, it is feasible to specialize in the customs, histories and local people’s lifestyle. For example, if a western visitor aims to do some sightseeing in the Chinese minority areas like Tibet, it is wise to get to know some taboo, learn some simple minority language and the minority tradition. Also, efforts should be made by those tourists guides or local mass media to disseminate local cultures and popularize some relevant travel taboo. In this sense, people will acquire the first-hand knowledge and thus have a deeper insight into a new country.

Overall, it is no easy task to iron out possible bias and conflicts before visiting some hot scenic spots. However, memorable travel experience favors the orepared minds.

(359 words)

雅思寫作如何算分