2022年6月四級救命指南！考前四級寫作點睛範文（上）

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01 圖畫作文：人生哲理

Directions: 

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on confidence. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

點睛範文：

As we can see from the picture, in a residential community with a television antenna on the roof, an upset young man is talking to his friend walking beside him along the street. It is apparent that the former assumes that someone else is more qualified than him.

Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence. Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step. Assuming bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as “huge” as you imagine.

On the whole, I believe we young people should face the difficulties in the right manner. And nothing is impossible, just do it.

參考譯文：

如圖所示，在一個屋頂架起電視天線的住宅小區，一個沮喪的年輕人正在和沿着街道走 在身旁的一個朋友聊天。顯而易見，前者認爲別人比自己能力更強。

表面上看，這幅圖畫似乎有一些道理，但當我們仔細思考時，我們就會發現在這個現象 之下有一個明顯的趨勢：缺乏自信。首先，衆所周知，我們生活在一個充滿各種困難的多元 化世界。我們別無選擇，只能面對。其次，態度是採取第一步的關鍵。擁有勇氣和信心來解 決問題，你就會發現問題並非你想象的那麼“嚴重”。

總而言之，我認爲我們年輕人應該以正確的方式面對困難。世上無難事，只怕有心人。

句型拓展：

1.It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them. 顯而易見，他們兩個人都誇大了面前的困難。

2.This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now. 這幅圖畫確實反映了一個目前在中國很普遍同時發人深思的社會現象。

3.Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us. 以我們自己爲例，研究生入學考試似乎是我們面前的一個可怕的怪物。

02 圖表作文：教育

Directions: 

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the chart below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the chart and then give your comments. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

點睛範文：     

The column chart clearly reveals the statistics of students taking part-time jobs in a certain university. According to the survey, there has been a steady increase from 67.77% to 71.93% for students holding temporary jobs from freshmen to juniors, while the percentage of seniors working part-time jumped markedly to 88.24%. 

The most obvious way that having a part-time job can adversely affect students ’ studies is by becoming a drain on the their time. Another way that part time employment can be detrimental to students is by reducing the perceived incentive to study. Despite presenting certain pitfalls, working part-time throughout my time at university also offer several potential benefits. For one, it can help students to better understand their preferences or to “test out” a possible career direction. Additionally, companies seeking to recruit recent grads will give preference to those with real-world experience. 

In the end, the impact of a part-time job on a student's academic career depends on the student’s ability to maintain focus and balance his or her own time.

參考譯文：

這幅柱狀圖清晰顯示了某高校學生兼職情況的數據。根據調查，從大一到大三，兼職 學生從 67.77%緩慢上升到 71.93%，而大四兼職學生的百分比則急劇上升到 88.24%。

兼職影響學業的主要問題就是耽誤時間。不利影響的另一方面就是會減少學生已有的 學習動力。儘管提到了某些弊端，但在大學階段做兼職還是有很多好處的。首先，兼職能讓 學生更好地瞭解自己的喜好或檢驗一種可能的職業方向。其次，那些招聘新近畢業生的公司 都會偏愛有實際社會經驗的大學生。

總之，兼職對大學生學業是否有影響取決於他們能否分清重點及平衡時間。

句型拓展：

1.There is a recognition that a candidate with a master’s degree will have a competitive advantage over those with only a bachelor’s degree.普遍公認碩士學位候選人將比那些只 有學士學位的人擁有明顯的優勢。

2.This is inevitable because ours is a society where one’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess.由於我們社會中一個人的收入仍然由你所擁有的知識所決定，因此 這一點不可避免。

3. With the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.隨着每年畢業的大學畢業生越來 越多，就業市場的形勢越來越嚴峻。

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