初一英語的六篇優秀範文與作文寫作指導

小升初後，很多孩子的英語成績總是差強人意，對中國學生來說，英語一直都是重難點，大家失分關鍵點也都是在英語上，特別是英語作文大扣分，所以初一英語作文輔導顯得尤其重要。小編整理了相關資料，希望能幫助到您。

　　初一英語的六篇優秀範文

Unit1 Can you play the guitar?

【寫作話題】本單元以能力爲話題，談論自己或他人的能力。如會幹或不會幹…….

【寫作要求】新學期開始，七(1)班同學踊躍參加班幹部競選活動。 假設你是Daming，請根據以下表格內容，寫一篇競選詞。

提示詞：would like, I can……, promise to

【優秀滿分範文】

My name is Daming. I would like to be the class monitor. Here are my reasons(理由).

First, I can get on well with everyone, classmates and teachers. Second, I work very hard so I do well at school. Finally, I can help teachers and I’m ready to help others.

Choose me as the class monitor. I promise to help you and make our classroom beautiful.

Unit2 What time do you go to school?

【寫作話題】本單元以日常生活習慣爲話題，描述自己或他人的日常生活習慣。

【寫作題目】根據下面提示寫一篇50詞左右的短文，介紹自己一天的活動安排情況。

【優秀滿分範文】

I usually get up at 6:30 . Then I have breakfast . At 7:10 I go to school . We have four classes in the morning , and three classes in the afternoon . At 4:30 p.m. I go home . After supper I do my homework . I usually watch TV from 8:00 to 9: the evening . Then I go to bed at 10:00.

Unit3 How do you get to school?

【寫作話題】本單元以如何到某地爲話題，描述請某地的方式。

【寫作題目】根據下面提示寫一篇70詞左右的短文。

張靜是我的好朋友，在青島上學，她的家距離學校約3千米，她通常騎自行車去上學，大約用20分鐘，但下雨時她乘出租車，大約5分鐘。她的父母在離家8千米的一家醫院工作，每天開汽車上班，大約要10分鐘。

【優秀滿分範文】

Zhang Jing is my good friend. She studies in Qingdao.

Her home is about three kilometers from school. She usually rides her bike to school and it takes her about twenty minutes when it rains, she goes to school by taxi. It takes her only five minutes . Her father and mother both work in a hospital. It’s eight kilometers from their home. They take a car to work . It takes them about ten minutes.

Unit4 Don’t eat in class.

【寫作話題】本單元以規則話題，以祈使句表達規則。

【寫作題目】根據下面提示寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

Tom 正和他的一個朋友Jim 談論他所在的學校。Tom 很不喜歡這所學校，原因是這所學校的規章制度太多。

要點：(1)保持安靜(2)不準吃零食(3)不準亂扔垃圾(4)不準打鬧(5)按時上課(6)做好課前準備

【優秀滿分範文】

Tom is talking about his school with his friend Jim. Tom tells Jim he doesn’t like this school very much, because there are too many school rules for us.

1. Keep quiet in the classroom ,please.

2. Don’t eat snacks in the classroom ,or it will make our classroom dirty.

3. Don’t throw around.

4. Don’t fight and chase after each other in the classroom. Of course, you can’t make any noise.

5. Please arrive at the class on time. Don’t be late, or our teachers will be unhappy.

6. Get ready before the class. Don’t look for anything after the class begins.

If we break any one of them, we will be punished.

Unit5 Why do you like pandas?

【寫作話題】本單元以動物話題，描述自己喜歡的動物及原因。

【寫作題目】根據下面表格的內容，以A Trip to the Zoo寫一篇60詞左右的短文介紹一下動物園新來的兩隻動物。

【優秀滿分範文】

A Trip to the Zoo

Welcome to the zoo. There are two new animals. The panda’s name is Feifei is from China likes eating bamboo. She is lovely and shy. She is only two years old. The other animal is a lion name is Karl. He is from Africa. He likes eating meat. He is very dangerous and strong. He is three years old all like them.

Unit6 I’m watching TV.

【寫作話題】本單元以人們正在進行的活動話題，用現在進行時描述自己或他人正在進行的活動。

【寫作題目】假設你叫魏梅，根據下面提示給你的朋友Helen 寫一張明信片，介紹一下你和你的家人正在做什麼，不少於60詞。

提示： 現在是星期三晚上八點，你的爺爺和爸爸在下象棋，奶奶和媽媽在看電視，姐姐在房間看書，哥哥在玩電腦遊戲。你們很開心。

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear Helen ,

How are you? It’s eight o’clock in the evening now. What are you doing now?

People in my family are doing different things. My brother is playing computer games. You see, he likes playing games very much. My grandpa and my father are playing chess. My grandma and my mother are watching TV and my sister is reading a book in her room. We are having a good time.

See you soon.

Love,

Wei Mei

　　初一英文作文怎麼寫?

一、充分準備，打好基礎。

爲了提高初一英語作文寫作水平，平時應加強閱讀，多背誦一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗話說：“讀書破萬卷，下筆如有神”，只有多讀，多記，多背誦，才能出口成章，下筆成文。此外，寫好初一英語作文還要掌握一些應用文體的寫作方法，如書信、日記、通知等，它們大多有固定的格式。

二、認真審題，明確要求

在寫初一英語作文的時候仔細看清寫作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着確定體裁、格式和人物、地點等要素;最後確定時態，同時考慮相關的語態搭配用法。

三、遣詞造句、表達規範

初一英語作文用詞要恰當，不可逐句把提示翻譯成英語。寫作時，應儘量選用你最熟悉、最有把握的詞和句型來表達思想。如果有些單詞不會些，有些句型不會表達，可以設法繞開，用熟悉的同義詞、同義短語或同義句來代替。要學會善於運用適當的關聯詞，如and,or,but,so，because,since等，以使初一英語作文行文邏輯緊密，自然流暢。

四、認真撰寫，卷面整潔

初一英語考試中也會有初一英語作文題，如果時間允許，書面表達一定要先寫草稿。在抄寫入答題卷前，要先進行檢查修改。首先檢查所寫內容是否切題;之後檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當;最後檢查所用時態、語態、人稱是否符合要求，前後是否一致。

給大家看幾個關聯詞~

1.表示並列或遞進:and,aswellas,both…and,

notonly…butalso,neither…nor;

2.表示選擇:or,either…or;

3.表示轉折:but,however,although,though,afterall,

4.表示因果:because,so,therefore

5.表示條件:if,unless

6.表示對比:instead,not…but,

ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;

7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,

thatistosay,inotherwords;

8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,

later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;

9.表示強調:also,besides,what’smore,actually,

infact,

10.表示結論:allinall,altogether,inaword,

generallyspeaking,