我最喜愛的城市 My favorite city

Shen Zhen is my favorite city. It is a young and promising city. I have been living in this city for over ten years. I love the seafood in this city as well as its beautiful scenes. In summer, I can go to the sea to see the sun rise, or enjoy the fresh cool sea water. On weekend, I can go to the park to have a walk. Shen Zhen is my hometown. When I grow up, I want to make contribution to this city and make it becomes a better city.

深圳是我最喜歡的城市。她年輕富有活力。我在這裏居住了10年。我愛這座城市的海鮮和美麗的風景。夏天來的時候，我可以去海邊看日出，或者去享受冰爽的海水。在週末的時候，去公園散散步。深圳是我的家。等我長大了，我要爲這所城市作出貢獻，讓她變得更好。