英語寫作亮點的表現方法

在寫作的時候。我們都是有自己設下的亮點。但是亮點如果不能凸顯的話。我們的 文章就會讓人感覺平淡無奇，不能吸引別人的眼球，當然也就不能得到好的成績，所以今天我們就總結一下寫作亮點的體現方法。

　　一、避免重複使用同一詞語

爲了使表達更生動，更富表現力，同學們在寫作時應儘量避免重複使用同一詞語來表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到“喜歡”二字，就會立刻想起like，事實上，英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如：

1. I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

　　二、適當運用非謂語結構

非謂語結構通常被認爲是一種高級結構，適當運用非謂語結構，會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。如：

1. When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。

2. As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由於不知道她的地址，我沒法和她聯繫。

3. As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

他出生農民家庭，只上過兩年學。

　　三、合理使用省略句

合理恰當地使用省略句，不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔，而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。如：

1. He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?

→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙，要是這樣，我以後再來拜訪。要是不忙，我現在可以見他嗎?

2. If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天氣好，我們就去;如果天氣不好，我們就不去了。

3. She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.

→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申請這份工作的，但她沒有。

　　四、靈活改變句子開頭

在通常情況下，英語句子的排列方式爲“主語+謂語+賓語”，即主語位於句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式，比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等，會使文章增強表現力。如：

1. There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.

→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

在小山頂上有一座古廟。

2. You can do it well only in this way.

→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有這樣你才能把它做好。

3. A young woman sat by the window.

→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗戶邊坐着一個年輕婦女。

4. The door opened and Mr Smith came in.

→ The door opened and in came Mr Smith.

門開了，史密斯先生走了進來。

寫好一篇英語文章，不能只靠枯燥的詞彙，也要注意文章內容的設計，希望大家在寫作的過程中能夠提高的更多。